1/18/2008

Haiku Friday - My Loves



Ironflower is
so beautiful and verbal
with many stories

She makes up the songs
She creates the silly games
always excited

she bounces into school
hugs her quieter classmates
we just play, she says

very passionate
knows exactly what she wants
so independent

mothers her brother
when she is not screaming aloud
about his behavior

My little Lovebug
the best smile in the whole world
also loudest scream

Hug! demands my babe
loving the tackle and the kiss
so affectionate

He dances around us
when not running around us
grinning all the way

So proud to say things
like thanks and 'peaz' and I do
he can say poop too

Fights for his desires
the most tenacious toddler
no giving up here

10 comments:

Kathryn said...

Awe. They sound like little sweeties. What a sweet ku!

monkeysandmarbles said...

what a sweet haiku...sounds like my little boys! ;-)

happy Friday!

Holly said...

What a great description of the kiddos. And, isn't it fun to watch their personalities come out? So shocking when the move from totally depending on you changes.

janet said...

that's so sweet! happy haiku friday!

Jerseygirl89 said...

Thank you guys so much! I realized I hadn't written anything very positive about them in quite a while! I hope you all have terrific weekend too.

AndreAnna said...

Such nice haikus to describe your kids individuality - very nice!

Jerseygirl89 said...

Andreanna - Thank you!

Leslie said...

Aw! Just so sweet!

AndreAnna said...

Such nice haikus to describe your kids individuality - very nice!

monkeysandmarbles said...

what a sweet haiku...sounds like my little boys! ;-)

happy Friday!